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                                                    The solar eclipse


It is one day until the solar eclipse happens (I have been counting down since last month) and I can't wait until tomorrow. First, I set my alarm at 6 am and I had to get my solar eclipse glasses. So that night,  I put all my supplies on the table but the next morning my glasses were gone!
I looked everywhere but then I saw my dog Ruffy and the dog was wearing glasses. I tried to get him but he ran away,  luckily I found him and we were able to watch the solar eclipse together.

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  1. A very creative story and a great way to tie in a dog wearing glasses. The ending really wrapped up your story as you watched the eclipse together. I can tell you have taken time and put in the effort on your punctuation and it pays off.

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  2. Great response to the 100WC with a topical and feasible idea. You've used a great range of punctuation including apostrophes for contractions and your ideas are linked well making a clear, easy to read story. Well done from Miss Nicholson Team 100WC

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